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It's known to us that smoking is harmful to our health,also bad to environment. Smoking,which has an influence on these people who are never smoking,is able to lead to lots of diseases such as lung cancer.The probability of passive smokers even higher than smoker.Some people think it's cool to smoke,and others considering smoking can refresh himself.Nowadays,It's a great progress to us that the flag don't smoking has been hung in more and more public places.We should make lots of efforts in order to our health to forbid people smoking in public.
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