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句式多变，多多练习从句的使用；语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；文中词汇表达较为丰富准确，但存在单词拼写错误。
It is been a long day without you my friend i'am so glad to receive you letter i heared that you will come to my hometown and have a trip in my hometown for some day My hometown is zhejiang in east of China i was born in hangzhou maybe you have been heared that hangzhou is a beautiful city so i would like to take you to see hangzhou wesrt lake a lot of people visit west lake every years i trust that west lake will expand your horizon due to i wll show you a number of view that you have never seen before late on i we are going to eat some food it is vital thing if someone come to hangzhou howerver didn't ate hangzhou food that is a so pity on the whole i believe you will have a good time in hangzhou and i am looking forward you going to my hometown
