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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40889
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
用户的作文(系统评分68.0分
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采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;可适当增加文中长句和复杂句的使用;作者平时练习中应扩充词汇量,注意几处拼写错误。

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When it comes to the truth, most poeple choose to believe what they heard and what they saw,which is considered to be absolutely true.However,things don't necessarily go in that way.What we heard and saw might just be one part of the fact.But if we just make conclusions by one part of the truth,there is a good chance that we'll make the wrong conclusion. Seen and heard is not always the truth. With the rapid development of technology,there are many things which were out of people's widest dreams come true.And by using technology,poeple can creat false impression. Even if the seen and heard is true, quoting the words of context without knowing the complete information is going to mislead people to the wrong conclusion. Wherever we are ,however it is ,shoudn't we make the conclusion by just what we heard and saw.

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