湖南衡阳市八中2013届高三5月月考试卷英语作文

文中衔接词丰富；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用；文中词汇多样性稍有欠缺，单词拼写也要更仔细。

As we all know,the shopping is very general，so the have a new shopping is coming，that is Online shopping。Have many people are use computer to shopping，it is very easy and convenient。But this exsits some problems，like something trust。someone maybe have deceived。I think ，before every shopping，we need choose good and a reputable shop，the will portact our interst.