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Nowadays we live in a society where new things appear constantly. Among these, online shopping is approved and accepted by more and more people especially by youngsters. People prefer to purchase on the internet rather than go window-shoping. And online shopping has been a fashion. As we all know,every thing has two sides. So online shopping is no exception. On the one hand,online shopping can save our time because we no longer need to go window-shopping. And we can also make our choice between many kinds of commodities showed on the internet. So every one can find a commodity he or she wants to buy. On the other hand,that we can't contact the commodity makes online shopping less reliable and trustworthy. And we might be confused by superficial information so as to purchase wrong thing. What's more, security problem also is a challenge we must face. Sometimes you have paid for a commodity but you can't receive it. As far as I am concerned, shopping on the internet is an irreversible trend. This new way will change our shopping habits greatly. And at the same time, we should try our best to make it better and make good use of online shopping.
