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I am thrilled to know that you is going to visit my hometown i still remember you so kind to me and i am so agree you idea that you desire to expand you horizon by travelling more and enrich your life so i will you have a good memory in China My hometown is zhejiang in east of China hangzhou of zhejiang i was born here maybe you have been heared about hangzhou due to best to know as hangzhou west lake and develomping city hangzhou have a lot of place attracts and worth recommand but i still think that take you to west lake buecause west lake have a large area which trip whole day on foot in envening,you wll amaze that you see splendid lights on lake and boats I bet you will have a good memory that you nerver forget and you just pack up and going to China if you have any question let me know please
