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I am thrilled to know that you is going to visit my hometown i still remember you so kind to me and i am so agree you idea that you desire to expand you horizon by travelling more and enrich your life so i will you have a good memory in China My hometown is zhejiang in the east of China hangzhou of zhejiang i was born here maybe you have been heared about hangzhou due to best to know as hangzhou west lake and develomping city there are numerous places and attractions worth recommending but i still think that take you to west lake buecause west lake have a large area which trip whole day on foot in envening,you wll amaze that you see splendid lights on lake and boats I bet you will have a good memory that you are unforgettable and you just pack up and going to China if you have any question let me know please
