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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:沟通的意义

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:28浏览次数:13013
要求:

题目要求:

围绕沟通的意义写一篇小文章。简明阐述自己的观点。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分82.5分
评语:

语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者词汇表达比较灵活多变,尤其是高级词汇使用较恰当;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩。

用户练习作文:

It is universally acknowledged that communication is the basis of a harmonious society.Without communication,we cannot understand others' thoughts which will result in misunderstanding even conflicts.For example,when you are late for work because of some incidents,you may be criticized by your boss.But you can communicate with your boss and interpret why you are late and it will never happen again.If no communication,you must leave a bad impression on your boss.It will affect your future development quite. Meanwhile,communication also plays an important role in the development of human being.To break one stick easily,but it's quite difficult to destroy thousands of sticks if they are combined together.There is always a strong team behind a great achievement rather than a person. So communication is an inseparable part of our life.

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