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作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文章词汇表达灵活恰当，也能较熟练地使用一定的高级词汇；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨。
It has been one year since I came the Chongqing Normal university.In this year,many things have hapened to me,including wonderful things，happy things，also disappointing things.As far as I'm concerned，all of these are rewarding and paves the way for future.Because these experiences promote the development of my personality and make me more mature. First of all，my college life is mainly made up of two parts，study and practice.In study，what I gained from it are not only knowledge，skill and methods， but also the persistent attitude. For instance,this attitude has a great impact on the learning achievement in the course of college English study.When I learned English，I have to do it with this attitude.Then,in practice，I learned how to get along with others and how to deal with matters.I became active，outgoing and flexible.So,what I want to say follow are friends I've made. Secondly,during the last year，since my change of character，I made many good friends.It is lucky for me to meet them.We study together and discuss joyfully.Nevertheless,what they bring to me was not only trust,understanding but warmth.They may pleasure me when I am sad，share the joy of life，work.They encourage me to go after my goals and pursue my dreams.In my opinion，they are my good teacher as well as friends. All in all,my first year of college was rewarding,I will keep it in my heart as my nice memory what ever happiness or sadness.And I will get more in the furture.
