小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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My best friend, Linkon, he is a staff in big firm. He work hard for his job, and always to help others. He also like play basket, every day you can see him in the basketball playground. Recently, he had fell in love with a girl, but that girl don't him, so he feel sad about that. However, he often try to find some chance to close that girl, dream that one day the girl will like him and agree that together with him. This my best friend Linkon, a work hard and sported guy.