2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

作者句法基本功不错，可适当增加从句的使用；文章用词太过单一，请作者增加词汇丰富度；衔接词较为不错，但文章结构不严谨。

You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life and then explain the consequences of overusing it. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life and then explain the consequences of overusing it. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life and then explain the consequences of overusing it.