拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;适当增加一些复杂句的使用,文章会更棒;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。
As i see this topic,the first idea come to my mind is that although human activities harm the nature,we still have to take good measures to improve the situation. It is universally acknowledged that we are all living in the same planet.What we do whether big or small will influence the earth.For example,we can use less disposable chopsticks.What is more,we can use the water which we used to flush toilet.And on tree planting day,we can plant as many trees as possible,which may make the air more fresher.