2011年12月10日雅思写作真题:如何处理人与自然的关系

拼写很棒，可适当增加高级词汇的使用；文中的句子基本没有错误，可适当将文中短句合并为长句；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨。

As I see this topic,the first idea came to my mind is that although human activities do great harm the nature,we still have to take good measures to improve the situation. It is universally acknowledged that we are all living in the same planet.What we do whether big or small will have great influence on the earth.For example,we can use less disposable chopsticks.What is more,we can use the water which we used to flush the toilet.And on tree planting day,we can plant as many trees as possible,which may make the air more fresher.