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Nowadays many people may think they are lacking of happiness for their life are filled with reverses.But actually,happiness is not the absence of problems,but the ability to geal with them. Helen is a world famous writer who are blind and can't hearing.Life is so cruel to her.If we don't know her achievements we may say"What a poor girl she is!"But thanks to her teacher,Helen didn't give up.She overcame all difficulties and finally became a successful writer.Now you may think she is such a lucky dog.May life is cruel to her,but her life is also filled with happiness for she dealt with problems successfully. So it's your attitute towards life that determinate whether you are happiness but not the life itself.
