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2006年6月英语六级作文真题:关于旅游

发布时间:2013-05-14 23:33浏览次数:2009[网页划词已开启]
要求:
1、近十年来某城市越来越多人选择出去旅游 
2、出现这种现象的原因 

3、这种现象可能产生的影响 

表格:

1995   2000  2005 
1万人   近4万 12万以上 

用户的作文(系统评分74.5分
评语:

采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;请作者增加词汇丰富度,加强拼写检查。

用户练习作文:

As is vividly showed in the above form, a risen number of people choose to go for a city travelling, In the last decade. In 1995, there is only 10,000 travellors, yet in 2005, more than 120,000 people visit cities. The reason for such phenomenon are as follows. With the sharp development of economy, people pay more attention to material life, which in turn boost the construction of the cities. People enjoy not the unique city sight, but the convenient shopping service. Meanwhile, the well devolped public transportation makes it comforting to go for this way. People are likely to enjoy themselves much better. Last but not least, city travelling will broaden people eyes as well. There are a lot of beneficial in the case. Firstly, the habitats of plant and animals where people used to visit are apt to have better protact. Besides, with so many people in the city, the facilities of the public are bound to developed.

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