2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

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The modern life We can see from the pictures that a man who is tired when he working,but he is full of energy to play computer at home.He doesn't go to bed until he is very tired.To our surprised,he dreams him to play the computer when he sleeps. Why appears this phenomenon? Firstly, in the productive social,internet has became a part of our life.Many people like to play the computer on the rest time.Secondly,most people doesn't make a plan about life time. In my opinion,we should control times that we play the computer at home.And we can use this time to do exercise and company our familiy.We can make our rest time became wonderful ,and we have better achieve our task.