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I have a friend , her name is hong, her english name is selly , I had been seen her before I went to dongguan. Sometimes I miss her. She is my classmate. We had been going to school together for three years. Her home is nearby our high school . She has a brother . She loves swiming , She likes cooking, but , she dislikes studying. I had often told her " you should study hard, it's very important to us " but she didesn't care at that time. She was seventeen when she left the high school.