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Recently our class had a discussion about what they would do in the coming summer vacation. Here is the result: Tina is going to Beijing,she likes Chinese history very much.For this vacation she goes to see the Great Wall and other beautiful sights in Beijing.It's lucky for her.She is very fun in this vacation,Jim stays at home.At the end of this semester.He is too tired and he wants to stay at home so that he has a good rest.He works hard to review his lessons and get ready for the next semester.He tries to help his family with something he could and learn to.....For this vacation,I go to my sister home with my brother.It's very bored in here,Everyday got up,brush, have breakfast and watch TV shows.Everyday is such a repeat.So my summer vacation is over.
