2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间；从句使用量太少；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

With the development of socialist,computer has been played a important role in our lives. As we all know,we can search in internet byour computer.We can also play game and chat with our friends.Human can communicate with each other,make business,make a order.It makes our lives be colourful and convenient. In the other side,some problem occur about computer.More and more college students prefer play games together to have lessons in the classroom.It is foolish for them.At the same time,many sexy information occur in our views.It is unhealthy for our children to live. In all,computer help human' lives more beautiful.We should enjoy it.Of course,computer also be used safely.