Peter
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Dear Peter,
Thanks for telling me about your problem. In fact most of the students will meet this kind of problem. I'm not surprised at it. And I think __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
David
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Dear Peter, Thanks for telling me about your problem. In fact most of the students will meet this kind of problem. I'm not surprised at it. Playing computer games too much is really bad for your study and your health.Let me give you some advice.I hope that it will help you.You can play computer on weekend after you finishing the homework and help you mom doing all the housework.And I think you can play computer after that. I'm sure you will get on well with your parents soon.