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中国人民大学附中八年级英语期末试卷英语作文

发布时间:2013-05-15 17:50浏览次数:1676
要求:
根据中文提示,写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短信。
假设你是校刊编辑David,收到了你校学生Peter的来信。请你根据他给你的信件内容写一封回信,谈谈你对他玩游戏的看法及解决问题的建议。
Dear David,
I have a problem! I like playing computer games very much. I often play it after I finish my homework. But my mother tells me to study hard and she often stops me from(阻止)playing games. So we often argue about(争吵) that. What should I do? Please help me!
Yours,

Peter

回信如下:

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Dear Peter,
Thanks for telling me about your problem. In fact most of the students will meet this kind of problem. I'm not surprised at it. And I think __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
David

用户的作文(系统评分59.0分
评语:

正确句子比例较高,适当增加复杂句的使用,文章会更出色;文中词汇表达多样性不足,在高级词汇方面尤其要多积累;过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当,缺少组织,可适当增加连接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

Dear Peter, Thanks for telling me about your problem. In fact most of the students will meet this kind of problem. I'm not surprised at it. Playing computer games too much is really bad for your study and your health.Let me give you some advice.I hope that it will help you.You can play computer on weekend after you finishing the homework and help you mom doing all the housework.And I think you can play computer after that. I'm sure you will get on well with your parents soon.

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