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语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；高级词汇使用较丰富，拼写做的很棒；作者句法基础较为扎实。
Many people may think if you want to achieve a challenging goal, you must pay all attention to it like putting all eggs in one basket. But in my opinion, putting all eggs in one basket is too risk and unwise to realize what you want to do because of some shortcomings. Paying all your focus on one point, you may definitely ignore others relation to it, which is unfortunately nothing is dependent in the world so that it is impossible that you can consider all aspects. That means you may miss some important details which will cause your failure. In addition, it is a invariable law to every existence in the world that nothing will stay still even just for one second, so we can not predict what the future looks like and the development of things which are unstable and changeable. Don't you think it is unwise to put all eggs in one basket when you just understand a particular period of things? As far as I am concerned, we should look other things around us in order to have more choice to choose which can save us when we are in trouble. So don't be unwise to put all eggs in one basket.
