语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;丰富的使用了长难句;部分高级词汇也能熟练使用,但文中有较多拼写错误。
Do you believe your instinction?in fact ,our conscious might be wrong,or you see what happend in your life,opposite with your conclude,people can pretend something to avoid you know something,you immediately decided is unresonable,wheather think about a while,jut two minutes,if you inquire other people,you can get a lot of opnions,please separate it,analysis it,you will receive more and more information,result would be accurate,all in all ,two point,indenpently thinking,survey other people,we different with minor animal,cause we have intellgent brain,god give our wisdom,we become mature,more smart,if you have sterotype for one thing,change it,everything is change ,same with you,we promote our moral,social is developed,never be recession,go forward you ideas to explore,you will find new thing
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