小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达，但要多积累学术词汇；运用了一些简单从句，但不是很熟练；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词；请注意分段。

I have a friend.Her name is hong,her english name is rita.I had been seen her before I went to dongguan.Sometimes I miss her.She is my classmate.We had been going to school together for three years.Her home is nearby our high school.She has a brother. She loves swiming,she likes cooking,but,she dislikes studying. I had often told her" you should study hard, it's very important to us".But she didn't care at that time.She was seventeen when she left the high school.