文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨;能够简单运用一些从句;文章词汇表达较丰富,不过请仔细检查词汇的拼写。
I have a very many friends,but who can understand me is just only one.I called his name as James.Jamse is a very clever and kind boy to attract many girls .We have the same hobbies such as playing basketball,singsing and sometimes we will discuss something difference in our study. James is my true friend.I think true friend is that helping you when you are in need and will correct you when you make mistake on the time.Long Long ago,we played basketball in the playround .And then,I carelessly broke up the window which belong to the people who lived nearby the playground.I do not know how about it suddenly so that I want to escape from that place.However,a hand graspsd me and said to me that Do not escape ,to be honest to face it.He just become a light to shine my heart and i feel powerful and warm .At lastly ,we say sorry for what we do and he forgive us. At that moment , I am not only learning that to be honest is necessary for us but also I realize that what imporeant role the true friend plays so I will cherish and study him.