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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第43篇:独自一人学习还是跟朋友一块儿

发布时间:2013-08-16 17:19浏览次数:1790
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作文题目:

Some students prefer to study alone. Others prefer to study with a group of students. Which do you prefer?

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

一些学生喜欢自己一个人学习,而另外一些学生喜欢结伴学习。你更喜欢哪种呢?给出具体原因和例子。

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In campus, there is a show that some students prefer to study alone and others prefer to study with a group of students. In your mind, which way is good for study? In my opinion, the coin has two sides. If you prefer to study alone, you can save more time to study and enjoy the quiet. Oftenly, we must wait our friends to study, which waste your time in it. Moreover, friends can disturb you, who want to chat with with you or make some noise. Futhermore, the relationship between you and your friends is of importence, which can effect your mood and study. For me, even though there are many disadventages, I prefer to study with a group. Because my friends give me too much help, not noly in my study. Always, if Ihave a question, I can ask help for my friends, and then we can disscuse it. In addition, my group can encourage me when I felt frustrated making me full of confidence. The last but not end, the group is my sunshine giving me happy and memory.

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