2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意极个别句子错误；文章词汇丰富度较好，一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活。

Everyone want to be a successful man so that they can get esteem,reputation and satisfaction of themselves.But the way to success is filled with difficulties that only allow small amout of people to pass through. It's always a hot topic that how to be successful.As a saying goes"Genius is 99 percent of hard work plus one percent of good luck.“Most of people are similarly in IQ,but there is quite a discrepancies between them in their attitude of hard work.So it's how hard you are that determinated what achievements you will get.The story of"yugong remove the mountains"is known by every Chinese children.It's his hard work that touch the gard who finally help him remove the two mountains.But that don't means you should working all the time.Use your brain in the same time.Although good luck only worth one percent,it's also very important.So grab the chance if you can and never let it go.