小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达，但要多积累学术词汇；若增加一些长难句的使用，文章会更好；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。

I have a friend. Her name is hong and her english name is rita. I have been seen her before I went to dongguan. Sometimes I miss her as she is my classmate. We had been going to school together for three years. Her home is nearby our high school. She has a brother. She loves swiming and she likes cooking, however she dislikes studying. I had often told her" you should study hard, it's very important to us". But she didn't care at that time. She was seventeen when she left the high school.