2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达，但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩。

Everyone wants to be a successful man so that they can get esteem,reputation and satisfaction of themselves.But the way to success is filled with difficulties that only allow few people to pass through. It's always a hot topic that how to be successful.As a saying goes"Genius is 99 percent of hard work plus one percent of good luck.“Most of people are similar in IQ,but there are quite different between them in their attitude of hard work.So it's your effects that determine what achievements you will get.The story of"yugong remove the mountains"is known to Chinese children.It's his hard work that touches the gard who finally helps him remove the two mountains.But that doesn't mean you should work all the time.Use your brain in the same time.Although good luck only worth one percent,it's also very important.So grab the chance if you can and never let it go.