雅思写作范文:出国旅游的利弊

文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨；作者在高级词汇方面要多下功夫，有些单词拼错了。

With the development of modern society, transportations and information is more and more convenient. We can go anywhere within one day, and get information form all over the world immediately.The massages about the outside of the world cause people's desire to travel. Travel to other countries is of great challengable to people who do not know ahout any word of the native language.This could cause lots of troubles,like getting lost in the way or could not communicating with the natives and even feeling unconfortable.Besides,travel to other counties may need to spend amount of money. Compared with the disadvantages, I think travel to other country have more advantages.Firstly,it can broaden one's horizon and gain more living experience about different cultural life.Secondly,you could relax yourself when you surrounding by the great sight seeing.Then travaling with firiend or families would be great benefit to your friendships or family bands.Last but not least , when you live in aborad different cultural conflict in your mind,which may lead to deeper thought about life and living. In conclusion,I think travel to other countries can develop a positive effect.