2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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I am very gald to introduce my hometown to you.There are many attractive places in my hometown,but I think the most interesting place is Wuhan.now ,let me tell you the reasons ! Wuhan is the captial city of Hubei province.You can see the Huanghe Towl,the Changjiangriver where chairman Mao had swam in.There are also many famous colleges ,like Wuhan University,Hubei university.If you like eating delicious food,Wuhan will not let you be disappointed.You can eat many kinds of foods in Hubuxiang. The transportation in Wuhan is very coveninent.There many amuseum parks.Huangle Valley is a good place to have fun .