2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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My hometown is Nanjing.This city had set up many years. I would like to take him to see some old buildings.such as FuZimiao.He can eat a lot of delicious food there.He can see qinghuai river and go boating on it.he can take part in the light party. I would like to take him to climb the ZiJin mounting.Zijin mounting is very beautiful.He can go camping there.He can watch the sky on the top of mountin and watch the sun rising.I think he will love it. I also would like to take him to the Memorial Hall of The Victims in NanJing Massacre by Japanese Invader.This place is important for everyone born in NanJing. This place record 300000 chinese were killed by Japanese in the second world war. I think he would be satisfied with the visiting.