2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；请作者增加词汇丰富度，加强拼写检查；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

With the development of the technology and economy,computer has found their way into our life.A more and more essentital role has been played in our dairy life. It is a good assistant to human.To begin with,it's conveninet for us to do work.The things need to be so much work force,which can be finished easily by computer.In other words,all social is being in an efficienal environment with the help of computer.Secondly,computer make a composation to be lack of the memory.We can take advantage of computer to remember so much thing. However,coin has two sides.Computer also brings about issue.So many adolence are indulge themselves to computer games.The phenomenon has been more and more serious.The progress of the sociation will be hindered. In my view,only when we realized the duty of the social,does the product exert their best power under our control.