拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误。
Nothing Succeeds without a strong will The strong will is important part of succeeds as evidenced again and again.If you have this desire,you would have reach to the succeeds. There is no doubt that the people who have strong will would finish the greater mission.Do one thing,you just depend on fantasy and talking that is never make a difference.Because the different is fill with everywhere the whole of your life,thus both of things don't work.you have to some spiritual things what is encourage you forward.It will be determine the vital of factor for someone's life condition.whether you have these of awareness or not.on the other hand,we should that develop those of thoughts from every aspects of life and make it get the charm of character.And then it would effect your mental with having experienced the previous life's experience growing.The ultimate it makes you reach the terminal by using those of special character.