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My hometown I was living in a nice town, green tree around the stree, the fish swiming in clear river; the house was simple, the road was narrow; people worked hard to support the family life. Now: high builing like the forest, many cars on the road. but the environment is becoming worse than before, less green tree, and the fish dispperced. the top important thing for goverment is to stop the pollution, improve the environment.