小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文章词汇表达比较灵活，学术词汇的使用要继续加强；简单句比重过高，另应加强复杂句的练习；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。

I have a friend. Her name is hong and her english name is rita. I had been meeting her before I went to dongguan. Sometimes I miss her as she is my classmate. We went to school together for three years. Her home is nearby our high school. She has a brother. She loves swimming and she likes cooking, however, she dislikes studying. I often tell her that she should study hard and it's very important to her. But she didn't care at that time. She was seventeen when she left the high school.