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从句使用很不错，再接再厉；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨；文中能较恰当地使用高级词汇，但存在较多拼写错误。
At recent years, economic growth rapidly, which lead to the development of techonoloy. Now, more and more people will use computer to search the imformation they want, no matter how old they are,even primary school stuents, and old aged people. There is a famous saying,"A wealth of information createa a poverty of attention."I think this saying has it truth in it. As the popularity of computer, the internet also generate a series information, they will adopt the wonderful topic to attract people attention, but in a large extend, this information is useless. How people avoid such irrelevant information,first, before they want to search information in the internet, they can make a list, which will make their objective more clear, seccond, they can cut down their curorsity.
