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字数：300 满分：100分
句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文中词汇表达丰富度不足，一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活；不能熟练使用过渡词，文章结构欠佳。
Money Management I have been at university for a year,and an important lesson I've learned is money management.In my mind,it is essential for us to save money. In my first semester at college,with so much money in my bank account.I spend it carelessly.I always spend my half of my money on traveling and foods at the begining of month.And in the end,I have a little money to live a extravagant life.I almost spend no money on my learning.It strike to me that I failed in my final exam.I was sad with this circumstance and I made my mind to save my money for my learning.And then,I spend times in studying my major.Fortunately,I gained what I want in the end.
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