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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8973
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分79.0分
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语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者句法很棒,合理使用了复杂句;文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了。

用户练习作文:

Appearance is the first impression on others, so some people may judge person by their appearance, in my opinion, which is unwise because it is difficult to know others inside that is most important. The reason why I insist on the viewpoint that I should never directly and irresponsibly come to a judgement only by appearance mainly lie in the following two aspects. Firstly, as most people know the first impression is so important that people will make up themselves which may confuse us. What's worse, chiefs would pretend they have more beautiful looks than others in order to get a great impression, then the more you care about people's appearance the more you will be cheated. Secondly, people's appearance is just one aspect, but all of us understand the development and change of all persons. So if you judge person by their appearance you may make many mistakes. As the saying goes, "You may know a person's face but not their mind." So it is unwise to judge person by their appearance.

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