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2003年专业四级英语作文真题:保持好心情

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:19浏览次数:3974
要求:
题目 The importance of keeping a good mood.
说明 People in modern society live under a lot of pressure, from education, career, or family. So it is important for them to keep a good mood under whatever circumstances. Write on ANSWER SHEET ONE a composition of about 150 words on the following topic: The importance of keeping a good mood.
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:200满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分42.5分
评语:

作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升,高级词汇使用过少;从句使用不足,建议增加长句和复杂句的使用;全文结构较为严谨。

用户练习作文:

I live in a quiet and old town,where there are no mountain and sea.Only has a group of kind people and a row of ancient walls.My hometown play an essential role in ancient times.When Beijing floods,in order to protect the big city will flood to here.Therefore,we can visit it"s symbols,old walls and old dams.

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