句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升,高级词汇使用过少;全文结构较为严谨。
I live in a quiet and old town,where there are no mountains and sea.Only have a group of kind people and a row of ancient walls.My hometown plays an essential role in ancient times.When Beijing floods,in order to protect the big city will flood to here.Therefore,we can visit it"s symbols,old walls and old dams.