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College life should be varied and colorful, and extracurricular activities are an important aspect of it. In spare time, college students ought to take part in extracurricular activities, from which they can get a good deal of benefits. As we know, taking part in extracurricular activities can improve students' abilities, such as communicative competence. They make contact with more people and develop their abilities as a result of participating in extracurricular activities. Taking part in extracurricular activities makes college life more colorful. It enables college students to enjoy more pleasure, which are brought by those activities. By taking part in extracurricular activities, they can make a lot of friends. Therefore, their lives will definitely become more colorful. In addition, it's a great opportunity for students to relax themselves. There is a saying that" All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy." Not only should college students study hard, but they should spend some time relaxing themselves, and taking part in extracurricular activities is a good choice. In short, it's necessary to participate in extracurricular activities to enrich college life and improve ourselves.
