2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

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Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will In the history,Every great people's success cannot leave their strong will and only hold strong will,they can finish their tasks.For example,Jeremy Lin ,a basketball player in NBA,at the first nobody care him.Most people think he won't success,but Jeremy Lin does never give up,every day he gets up eariler and train hard,so at the end of he meets the success