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字数：300 满分：100分
过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间；句式变化较为明显，可适当增加从句的使用。
Now,many people like buying some discount goods,they think that will save some money.But they have not consider that it just another way to cost money,they only use the money that they save to buy other things,those money finally spend by themselves. I think that if we want to save money,we can make a plan to restrain ourselves.For example,you can take a note which recond all your money,and then plan the specific cost note,such as today you must buy something.Second,you can consider clearly which things are the major you must buy,and which things you just only think. That is all my opinions.In the last,i want say,when you buy somethings you want,thinking that is true that you really need.Saving money is a good habit for us.
