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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33612
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分67.0分
评语:

过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间;句式变化较为明显,可适当增加从句的使用。

用户练习作文:

Now,many people like buying some discount goods,they think that will save some money.But they have not consider that it just another way to cost money,they only use the money that they save to buy other things,those money finally spend by themselves. I think that if we want to save money,we can make a plan to restrain ourselves.For example,you can take a note which recond all your money,and then plan the specific cost note,such as today you must buy something.Second,you can consider clearly which things are the major you must buy,and which things you just only think. That is all my opinions.In the last,i want say,when you buy somethings you want,thinking that is true that you really need.Saving money is a good habit for us.

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