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作者高级词汇积累做的很棒，但总体词汇丰富度要加强；错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；全文结构较为严谨。
Considering the advancement of technology, the potential danger of leak of privacy and the restriction of freedom of expression, there is no need of real name registration on social networking website. 1) Because of the powerful ability of technology, the police can easily find the cyber criminals. 2) Nowdays, the network environment is insecure, our personal information might be stolen by hackers. 3) The real name registration would harm netizens’ enthusiasm of expression in internet. In conclusion, real name registration on social network websits have such bad affects on people that we can not agree it.
