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简单句型过多，从句使用不熟练；高级词汇积累做的很棒，但总体词汇量稍小；不能熟练使用过渡词，文章结构不严谨。
Thesis statement: The authority should not require social networking websites to have real name registration. Evidence: 1. The real name registration in the social networking will give criminals chance to thieve cyber citizens’ personal information, like ID card. 2. The real name registration in the social networking will make the Internet full of swindling traps, such as financial crime. 3. The real name registration in the social networking will affect the social communication; affect the people’s freedom of speech. It also will affect people’s Internet life in some degree. Conclusion： In order to keep a healthy networking society and people’s personal information security, it is not necessary to require social networking websites to have real name registration.
