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能较准确地使用高级词汇，还需请作者增加词汇丰富度；使用了部分简单的长难句，可适当增加一些复杂的长句；文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构。
The authority should not require social networking websites to have real name registration. The real name registration in the social networking will give criminals chance to thieve cyber citizens’ personal information, like ID card. The real name registration in the social networking will make the Internet full of swindling traps, such as financial crime. The real name registration in the social networking will affect the social communication; affect the people’s freedom of speech. It also will affect people’s Internet life in some degree. In order to keep a healthy networking society and people’s personal information security, it is not necessary to require social networking websites to have real name registration.
