小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

简单句比重太高了；文中单词拼写做的不错，另外再增加词汇量积累就更好了；全文结构不够严谨，文中很少使用衔接词和过渡词；连词使用偏少。

My new teacher. recently there is a new teacher will teach us English. I heard that her name is kelly. She is twenty , how young she is. Starting from today she will work at our school. She is very beatuful. Especially eyes and mouth. Her eyes are very black. Her mouth is very small. My classmate Rita said she likes cooking . I asked Rita that why she know this. Rita told me that kelly is her aunt. That's wonderful.