内容:本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品,非常感兴趣,请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作,希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
【高频词句】
1.price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2.establish business relationship建立贸易关系
采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者高级词汇积累做的很棒,但总体词汇丰富度要加强;句式变化较为明显,另外句法层面做的不错。
There is a widespread concern over the issue that if the riches should make contibutions to social charity . But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person. A majority of people think that the riches are supposed to devote their love to community charities. In their views, there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude .The reasons are as follows: in the first place, the riches have the abilities to help more people than those who are not so affluent.Furthermore, in the second place,This is also a part of the social responsibility for the riches,which is of vital importance for them .However, some people hold the opposite opinions that the riches needn´t take part in social charities. In their point of view, the government should play the most important role in social charity. As far as I am concerned, I am strongly convinced the view that the riches shoud contribute to doing some charity. It is not only because they have more opportunities to help others, but also because everyone should take action to make the world full of love and warm. The more people join in it , the better the world becomes.