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英语三级A卷作文模拟附范文:写邮件

发布时间:2013-05-23 22:10浏览次数:14156
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说明:假定你是胡斌,根据下列内容写一封邮件。 
发信人E-mail地址:hubin@163.com 
收信人E-mail地址:KPOHsales@hotmail.com 

内容:本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品,非常感兴趣,请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作,希望我们可以建立贸易关系。

【高频词句】 
1.price list and instruction价格单和说明书 
2.establish business relationship建立贸易关系

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采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;文章在句法方面做的很棒,从句和复杂句的使用不错;作者高级词汇使用比较准确,词汇表达较丰富,但仍需增加词汇积累。

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 There is a widespread concern over the issue that if the riches should make contributions to social charity. But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.A majority of people think that the riches are supposed to devote their love to community charities.In their views,there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude.The reasons are as follows:in the first place,the riches have the abilities to help more people than those who are not so affluent.Furthermore,in the second place,This is also a part of the social responsibility for the riches,which is of vital importance for them.However,some people hold the opposite opinions that the riches need not take part in social charities. In their point of view,the government should play the most important role in social charity. As far as I am concerned,I am strongly convinced that the riches should contribute to doing some charity.It is not only because they have more opportunities to help others,but also because everyone should take action to make the world full of love and warmth.The more people join in it,the better the world becomes.

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