小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文章衔接手法恰当；句法知识较好，但需加强句式变化；文中拼写错误稍多，作者词汇量偏小。

my friends was very litter,but very friendship with me who was my hight school mater. he was very clear man, and was a very beatiful man,and was good at our school lessons.we always talk our future and someting of our life,like the school grils. we have been dance together when we was school student. it was the second year of our hightschool. we alway talk with the phone and the computer.